Friday, October 23, 2015

First Step to Analyze a Poem

First, look at the form;
How many stanzas?
How many lines in each one?
Any noticeable rhyme scheme?

Is it a Ballad type,
that is common so,
by making every other line rhyme like
the end of two lines ago?
[Who caught the internal rhyme?]

notice any grammar oddities
perhaps no punctuation
or long run on sentences
without any capitalization

Look for
any
sort
of weird
Enjambment
in the
stanza.

It happens often when the poet
decides to personify
an inanimate
object
to help you understand
the poem’s thoughts.

Also, what persona is the poet?
Am I me? Or am I someone else?
And who is you?
Is you you, or is you the human nearby?

Be wary of caesuras. They make you stop and think.
Look for clichés like ‘Love is a flower’.
Wait a minute, did you just read a metaphor or a simile?

It’s funny when when you see repetition.
Yet know it it is on purpose.
It stresses the diction the poet meant.
Don’t you you just just love love this this so so much much?
[did you catch the irony involved?]

Understand the difference between
‘denotation’and ‘connotation’.
Denotation, society teaches us, is the literal definition;
Connotation, Webster explains, is the secondary meaning the word can refer to.

Alliteration is quite important.
Common consonance
or annoying assonance
is there to purposely set the tone.

Now, you see how to do step one.
Yet, the analyzation had just begun.
Good luck on the rest;
I now bid you adieu.

But before I leave,
I’ll give directions for the rest:
Solve the message of the poem’s purpose.
And don’t forget: which school does this poem belong to and why?

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Shit List

[Dedicated to Ryan Dillaha and his unique teaching methods]

The fear.
The embarrassment.
The humility.
The shame.

The permanent name
engraved
in the board’s corner
lingering;
leering down
for all to know
as you crouch low;
praying
for Korach’s Hole.

The incriminating letter
burns
in your backpack
as you walk home
head hung in despair
with the ring of the
Kindergartens’ bell.

The discipline
shows the next day
with the fidgeting
of your buttocks
as you try to sit
still;
quiet,
alone.
A teacher’s pet.


A name erased.